Thursday, June 11, 2009

the pond at the park

here's a haiku-ish piece i came up with while i was staring into the green pond at family park, a "snapshot" of the moment, inspired by the "pan of stars" haiku i read some weeks back. if you're wondering what it means, i wrote it to mean nothing else but my own confusion. any other imagined meanings are welcome :)


the pond at the park

the clouds floating under
the water confuse me:
are the fish swimming?
or are they flying?

2 comments:

Sun Jun said...

nice observation ken ^^

kenneth said...

thank u po :)